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Kyle Bryson 是一个英国小伙子。他是一名经理(。他),長得高,而且好看。他有空的时候喜欢(從事各種球類)运动,像是足球、蓝*籃球、**拉格比英式橄欖球,等等。他不喜欢看书。虽然他也不喜欢听音乐,但是他喜欢和朋友一起去晚会(/***舞廳)跳舞。周(/****週)末花时间添购物新衣(服)或者开车去兜風。夏天他則喜歡在海滩游泳。
*"籃"球,its radical is "竹" but "艹". You can figure out that basetball is a kind of sport with bastets and then 籃子(baskets) are made of the bamboo.
**拉格比 is a name of the city in England; 英式橄欖球(rugby) is sort of like American football without wearing helmets and shoulder/thigh pads.
***晚會 implies a more formal occassion; 舞廳 implies a ball for entertainment.
****The character "週" is the right one to write in Taiwan.
Kyle Bryson is a young English man. He is a manager, He is tall and good looking. In his free time he likes to play sports- football, basketball, rugby, etc. He doesn't like reading. Although he doesn't like music he likes to go dancing with friends. At the weekend he enjoys shopping for new clothes or driving his car. In the summer he likes to swim at the beach.
Aim: I need to practice basic sentences so this is a description of an invented positive outgoing character.
Personal description
Kyle Bryson 是一个英国小伙子。他是一名经理。他高,帅。他有空的时候喜欢运动,比如踢足球,打蓝球,玩橄榄球,等等。他不喜欢看书。他虽然不喜欢听音乐,但是他喜欢和朋友一起去跳舞。他在周末喜欢逛街买新衣服或者开车。在夏天他喜欢在海边游泳。
Kyle Bryson is a young English man. He is a manager, He is tall and good looking. In his free time he likes to play sports- football, basketball, rugby, etc. He doesn't like reading. Although he doesn't like music he likes to go dancing with friends. At the weekend he enjoys shopping for new clothes or driving his car. In the summer he likes to swim at the beach.
Aim: I need to practice basic sentences so this is a description of an invented positive outgoing character.
Personal description
Kyle Bryson 是一个英国小伙子。他是一名经理。他高,好看。他有空的时候喜欢运动,足球,蓝球。拉格比, 等等。他不喜欢看书。虽然他不喜欢听音乐,但是他喜欢和朋友一起去晚会跳舞。周末花时间购物新衣服或者开车。他夏天在海滩游泳。
Kyle Bryson is a young English man. He is a manager, He is tall and good looking. In his free time he likes to play sports- football, basketball, rugby, etc. He doesn't like reading. Although he doesn't like music he likes to go dancing with friends. At the weekend he enjoys shopping for new clothes or driving his car. In the summer he likes to swim at the beach.
Aim: I need to practice basic sentences so this is a description of an invented positive outgoing character.
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1.He is tall and good looking.
他很高,长得也很好看。
2.basketball is “篮球”,not “蓝球”。 蓝 means “blue” in chinese. 篮 means "basket"
3.At the weekend he enjoys shopping for new clothes or driving his car.
周末他喜欢去购物,买新衣服,或者开车兜风。
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