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Some Sentences Oct 4 2015 (If there’s something wrong, please correct me.) ① I lazed around this weekend. ② I’m planning to live other countries after I finish my school. I would like to live and work in different countries because I would like to see different cultures and meet different people to expand my experience. ③ When I was a college student, I was not interested in going abroad and did not know outside. I was narrow minded. ④ Sometimes, you need to step back and see the big picture. ⑤ If I spoke English well, I would get on better with some friends.
4 окт. 2015 г., 23:14
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Some Sentences Oct 4 2015 (If there’s something wrong, please correct me.)


I laid around this weekend.

(or you could also say: I had a lazy weekend.)




I’m planning to live in other countries after I finish my schooling. I would like to live and work in different countries because I would like to see different cultures and meet different people to expand my experience.




When I was a college student, I was not interested in going abroad and did not know the outside. I was narrow minded.




Sometimes, you need to step back and see the big picture.


If I spoke English well, I would get on better with some friends.

5 октября 2015 г.

Some Sentences Oct 4 2015 (If there’s something wrong, please correct me.)


I lazed around this weekend.

I had a lazy weekend./I was lazy this weekend.


I’m planning to live other countries after I finish my school. I would like to live and work in different countries because I would like to see different cultures and meet different people to expand my experience.

I'm planning to live in other countries after I finish my schooling. I would like to live and work in different countries because I would like to see different cultures and meet different people to expand my experience.


When I was a college student, I was not interested in going abroad and did not know outside. I was narrow minded.
When I was a college student, I was not interest in going abroad and did not know what was out there. I was narrow-minded.

Sometimes, you need to step back and see the big picture.

This is correct


If I spoke English well, I would get on better with some friends.

If I spoke English well, I would be closer with some friends. (I'm not sure if I understand your context here.)

5 октября 2015 г.
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