Junho Lee
Hello everyone This is my first writing in 'italki'. I'm so worried about my English shown everyone but I try to write and talk anybody to teach and fix my text. I'm going to my lab to study and research the experiment in the subway. If you saw this text, feel free to change my word and contact me to message!
6 окт. 2015 г., 22:59
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Hello everyone

This is my first time writing in on 'italki'.
I'm so worried about my English being shown to everyone but I will try to write and talk for anyone anybody to teach and fix correct my text (and teach me English).
I'm going to my lab to study and research the an experiment in the subway.
If you see saw this text, feel free to change my wording and contact me to message!

 

I made a lot of corrections but you have great vocabulary but need to work on your prepositions verb use. Good job! Keep writing! :)

7 октября 2015 г.
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