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I made a "Wii remote control cushion”
Hello.
Today I made a Wii remote control cushion. It was so easy and cheap. First, I prepared the white cloth and thread. Next, I sewed the pieces of cloth together. I like sewing cushions and soft toys, because they are the only ones in the world. (I like sewing cusions and soft toys because it means i can create something unique that no one else in the world has)
Thank you for your reading my notebook. If you find a mistake, could you correct it please?
Thank you.
Great idea! Don't forget that you don't need a line break for each sentence. Each sentences should come one after the other. Unless you are starting a new paragraph. You start a new paragraph when you a writing a new thought.
I made a "Wii remote control cushion”
Hello.
Today I made a Wii remote control cushion.
It was so easy and cheap.
First, I prepared the white cloth and thread.
Next, I sewed the pieces of cloth together.
I like sewing cushions and soft toys.
Because It is the only one in the world.
Thank you for your reading.
If you find a mistake in my notebook, could you correct it?
Thank you.
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