make new friends Hello, I'm from Vietnam I want to make new friends. Especially someone want to help me improve my English. And I will help someone who want to learn VietNamese.

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Hoài

29 нояб. 2015 г., 3:37

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make new friends

Hello, I'm from Vietnam and I want to make new friends. Especially someone who wants to help me improve my English. And I will help someoneanyone who wants to learn Vietnamese.

or:

Hello, I'm from Vietnam and I want to make new friends, especially people who want to help me improve my English. And I will help anyone who wants to learn Vietnamese.

29 ноября 2015 г.

You shouldn't start a sentence with either 'especially' or 'and' ; you can link the phrases in a single sentence : Hello, I'm from Vietnam, I want to make new friends, especially with someone who wants to help me improve my English, and I will help them to learn Vietnamese.

2 декабря 2015 г.

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