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Some informations about the Yangtze River(4) There's a big freshwater lake which is named Dongting Lake between Hubei and Hunan .It's located in the northeast of Hunan Province and the second largest freshwater lake in China, flows into Yangtze River in Yueyang City Hunan province(岳阳市). There're two main tributaries of the Yangtze River flow into the lake: Xiangjiang River (湘江)and Yuanjiang River(沅江). Jiujiang City(九江市), the second largest city in Jiangxi Province; Anqing City,(安庆市),was the provincial capital of Anhui province for a long time before 1960s. The center of the two both cities are very near of Yangtze River. Hukou County(湖口县), the estuary of Poyanghu Lake is located in the county. That's why it's named. Poyanghu Lake, (鄱阳湖)the largest freshwater lake in China. Ganjiang River(赣江)flows into the lake, which is also the one of the main tributaries of the Yangtze River. From this section,there isn't any main tributary of over 300 kilometers .Chaohu Lake (巢湖), which is also a famous freshwater lake, is also near of the Yangtze River. Hefei City(合肥市), the provincial capital of Anhui, is in the north of the lake. Nanjing City, is a famous city of travel. Because it was the national capital of many dynasties in the ancient history of China.the Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge is also very famous in China. Taihu Lake(太湖), the second largest freshwater lake in China, is located between Jiangsu Province and Zhejiang Province,Wuxi and Suzhou, the two both big cities are located in the north bank of the lake. Of course, Shanghai is the final station of the traveling of Yangtze River. Everybody knows that it's the biggest city in China. The estuary of the Yangtze River is in the area between Qidong (启东)County Level City Jiangsu Province and Pudong District Shanghai City. There's a big island in the middle of this area. It's named Chongming Island, (崇明岛)the third biggest island in China. Now, the traveling of Yangtze River is over.
8 дек. 2015 г., 10:19
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Some informations about the Yangtze River(4)

There's a big freshwater lake which is named Dongting Lake between Hubei and Hunan .It's located in the northeast of Hunan Province and the second largest freshwater lake in China and flows into Yangtze River in Yueyang City Hunan province(岳阳市). There're two main tributaries of the Yangtze River that flow into the lake: the Xiangjiang River (湘江)and the Yuanjiang River(沅江).
Jiujiang City(九江市), the second largest city in Jiangxi Province; Anqing City,(安庆市).  It was the provincial capital of Anhui province for a long time before the1960s. The center of the two both cities are very near of Yangtze River. Hukou County(湖口县), the estuary of Poyanghu Lake is located in the county. That's why it's named. Poyanghu Lake, (鄱阳湖)the largest freshwater lake in China. Ganjiang River(赣江)flows into the lake, which is also the one of the main tributaries of the Yangtze River. From this section,there isn't any main tributary of over 300 kilometers .Chaohu Lake (巢湖), which is also a famous freshwater lake, is also near of the Yangtze River. Hefei City(合肥市), the provincial capital of Anhui, is in the north of the lake.
Nanjing City, is a famous city of travel. Because it was the national capital of many dynasties in the ancient history of China.the Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge is also very famous in China. Taihu Lake(太湖), the second largest freshwater lake in China, is located between Jiangsu Province and Zhejiang Province,Wuxi and Suzhou, the two both big cities are located in the north bank of the lake.
Of course, Shanghai is the final station of the traveling of Yangtze River. Everybody knows that it's the biggest city in China.
The estuary of the Yangtze River is in the area between Qidong (启东)County Level City Jiangsu Province and Pudong District Shanghai City. There's a big island in the middle of this area. It's named Chongming Island, (崇明岛)the third biggest island in China.

Now, the traveling of Yangtze River is over.

There're is correct but not often used in writing.  Usually write "there are"

The Yangze river

Shanghai City

Lake Taihu

"The" is often used when describing rivers.  But cities and lakes not.  I am not sure why.

Well done....not many mistakes.



9 декабря 2015 г.
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