Pierre
hong kong, another planet i visited hong kong during theses christmas holidays! For a man living paris, a very old city, visiting hong kong means to go on another planet. A undescribable mass of steal and glass raised so high... each building are so narrow and so close side by side yes indeed we are on a small portion of earth surounded by ocean and each centimeters counts. Cantonese, Indonesian, Tawainese, Chinese English and many more, all culture are living together, and i take pleasure to imagine what sort of human beings this mix could produce in.. some decades.
9 янв. 2016 г., 21:38
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Hong Kong, Another Planet!


visited Hong Kong during theses Christmas holidays! For a man person living in Paris, a very old ancient city, visiting Hong Kong means to is like going to on another planet. An undescribable mass of steel and glass structures/buildings raised so high... Each building are so narrow and so close side by side to each other.  yes Indeed we are on such a small portion of earth land surounded by the ocean. and each Every millimeter centimeters counts.


Cantonese, Indonesian, Tawainese, Chinese, English and many more, all other cultures are living together, and I take pleasure to imagine what sort of human beings this mix could produce in..This means that the people grow different physically, having three eyes etc.  Not the intent you are trying to say. wonder how the populace turn into in some future decades.

9 января 2016 г.
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hong kong, another planet

I visited Hong Kong during the Christmas holidays! For a man living paris, a very old city, visiting hong kong means to go on is like going to another planet. It is A an undescribable mass of steal and glass raised so high... each building are is so narrow and so close side by side. Yes, indeed we are It is on a small portion of earth surounded by ocean and each centimeters centimetre counts.
Cantonese, Indonesian, Tawainese, Chinese English and many more: all culture are there are so many cultures living together and i take pleasure to imagine in imagining what sort of human beings this mix could produce in.. some future decades.

9 января 2016 г.

Hong Kong, Another Planet

I visited Hong Kong during the Christmas holidays! For a man living in Paris, a very old city, visiting Hong Kong is like going to another planet. An undescribable mass of steel and glass raised so high... each building is so narrow and so close standing side by side. Yes indeed, when we are on a small portion of earth surrounded by ocean each centimeter counts.
Cantonese, Indonesian, Taiwanese, Chinese, English and many more nationalities are found there...... all these cultures are living together and I take pleasure imagining how this cultural mix will evolve in the next few decades.

 

*****Just a few corrections. I tried to keep the integrity of what you wrote.

 

9 января 2016 г.
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Pierre
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китайский (путунхуа), китайский (другой), английский, французский
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