victims of terrorism(3)
Speaking about their experience, victims of terrorism can help us to prevent against indoctrination. The victims want to be a useful member of our society. As we must fighting terrorism, we must also have a concrete action plan to prevent it.
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Victims of Terrorism(3)
Speaking about their experiences, victims of terrorism can help us prevent indoctrination. The victims want to be useful members of our society. As we must fight terrorism, we must also have a concrete action plan to prevent it.1
Victims of Terrorism_(3)
By speaking about of {or "By talking about"} their experience, victims of terrorism can help us to prevent against indoctrination. The victims want to be a useful members* of our society. As we must continue to fighting terrorism, we must also have a concrete action plan to prevent it.*"Victims" is plural, so everything subsequent to has to agree.
**The two instances of "must" in close proximity sounds awkward, so I rephrased it. Other possibilities: "As we are compelled to fight" or "As we must combat terrorism, so, too, must we have a concrete action plan to prevent it." {the "so too" is a phrase we use to emphasize the repetition."}
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