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The Story Of a Prince 1 There was a prince of a kingdom.He had grate personality,so he was loved by everyone. One day,in his big room,an event had occurred .That Kingdom's castle had some waterways .Sometimes some fish was flowed away in water because there were connected with the sea.And one of the waterway ran through the prince's room. When the prince backed his room,something was wrong. "Someone is here!"The prince felt. And then,the sound of water was sounded! "Who are you!!"The prince shouted.

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The Story Of a Prince 1

There was a prince of a kingdom. He had grate personality,so he was loved by everyone.

There was a kingdom with a prince. He had a great personality and was loved by everyone.

One day,in his big room,an event had occurred .That Kingdom's castle had some waterways. Sometimes some fish was flowed away in water because there were connected with the sea.And one of the waterway ran through the prince's room.

One day in his room, an event occurred. The kingdom's castle had some waterways and because the waterway connected with the sea, fish were sometimes swept away into the water  This caused a problem because one of the waterways ran through the prince's room.

When the prince backed his room,something was wrong.
"Someone is here!"The prince felt.
And then,the sound of water was sounded!
"Who are you!!"The prince shouted.


When the prince returned to his room, he felt like something was wrong.

"Someone is here!" The prince exclaimed.

And then, he heard the rush of water.

"Who are you?!" The prince shouted.

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>Yesso Was that not good expression?
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You mean great personality??

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