The using of internet
Currently most people use the internet much more than before. Furthermore now it is possible using anywhere, at home or in your mobile. Even though this development can bring good things for our lifes,it also can give us many problems, for many reasons.
First, to argue this issue it is important to show the advantages of this invention. With one touch we can travel arround the world in seconds. In addition to we can increase our knowledge of everything. We can also can playing games, shopping, seeing movies and series. Also is possible talk with another person that is very far from us.
Second, the using of internet can give us many problems. Although we are alone when we use it, we are not safety. Because it is very easy to invade our privacity, like photographs and documents. Moreover has many false information,it can become in a waste of time,you can forget yoyr true life.
Finally the survey demonstrating can not show all the possibilities of using the internet. Despite of numbers, men and women waste time using the internet. The only true is that represents that men use internet more than women.
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Using the Internet
First, to argue this issue it is important to show the advantages of this invention. With one touch we can travel arround the world in seconds. In addition to we can increase our knowledge of everything. We can also can playing games, shopping, seeing movies and series. Also is possible talk with another person that is very far from us.
Second, the using of internet can give us many problems. Although we are alone when we use it, we are not safety. Because it is very easy to invade our privacity, like photographs and documents. Moreover has many false information,it can become in a waste of time,you can forget yoyr true life.
Finally the survey demonstrating can not show all the possibilities of using the internet. Despite of numbers, men and women waste time using the internet. The only true is that represents that men use internet more than women.
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