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Recent my worry... Japanese Meteorological Agency said tsunami will be sure to come to Japan again within a month. They said the height of tsunami will be 10 meters in Sendai. That is almost same the height of last time. But we will suffer heavy damage more from tsunami. Because coastal towns don't have barriers because of the last tsunami. Now, each coastal town's people and Japan Self Defence Forces are do their best to revive. But If the thing become reality, that will be meaningless. I don't hope it. I desire to smile in all Japan. All Japanese are thankful to people around the world. Thank you very very much.

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I'm a native English speaker and I'm sorry to say that I think some of the suggested corrections above are wrong, or at least sound a little strange.  Here are my suggestions:

Recent my worry...
My recent worry...

The Japanese Meteorological Agency said another tsunami will be sure to come to Japan again within a month. They said the height of tsunami will be 10 meters in Sendai. That is almost same the height of as last time. But we will suffer more heavy damage more from a second tsunami  . B   because coastal towns don't have barriers because of the last tsunami. Now, each coastal town's people and the Japan Self Defence Forces are do doing their best [to revive - I don't understand "to revive".  Maybe "doing their best to restore the defences"?  Or you could just say "are doing their best.".] But Iif the thing prediction become becomes reality, that will be meaningless. I don't hope it. I hope it doesn't.

[I desire to smile in all Japan I don't understand this]. All Japanese are thankful to people around the world. Thank you very very much.



I also hope this doesn't become reality.

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取り越し苦労しないでね。
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Recent my worry...

Japanese Japan Meteorological Agency said confirmed that tsunami will be sure to come to Japan again within a month. They said the height of the tsunami will be reach 10 meters in Sendai. That is almost the same the height as the tsunami of last time. But we will suffer heavy even more damage more from this upcoming tsunami. Because , because coastal towns don't have losed their barriers because of the last tsunami. Now, each coastal town's people and Japan Self Defence Forces are do doing their best to revive Japan. But If the thing prediction become became reality, that those works will be meaningless. I don't hope it.
I desire to see smile smiles in all around Japan. All Japanese are thankful to the people around the world.(do you mean the people who helped Japan instead?) Thank you very very much.

That is a very bad news for Japan. I hope that won't be happened too.

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