About my father This is my father who plays guitar leftmost. He and friend play in a band. But this day they played acoustic and play with professional singers in Ishidamitsunari festival. Rightmost a

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About my father This is my father who plays guitar leftmost. He and friend play in a band. But this day they played acoustic and play with professional singers in Ishidamitsunari festival. Rightmost and second is "仁王 Niou". It is second time to play together. Their music is so great. Please be sure to listen to this song.→→→https://youtu.be/REd_uyu04Co If my English is wrong please correct me.

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About my father

This is my father who plays guitar left-handed. He and his friend play in a band. But today they played acoustic ~~and play~~ with professional singers at Ishidamitsunari festival. Rightmost and second is "仁王 Niou". It is second time to play together. Their music is so great. Please be sure to listen to this song.→→→https://youtu.be/REd_uyu04Co
If my English is wrong, please correct me.

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Rightmost and second is "仁王 Niou". It is second time to play together. - Not sure what you mean here, please rephrase

'at' = で (as a particle)

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