A Brief Introduction of A Boy
Hello, everyone! My name is Ryan. I live in Zhuwei in New Taipei City. I love Taiwan because Taiwan is very beautiful. I like to write stories very much. I can make up a world and all the characters in it by my self. The whole process is very interesting. Besides, I also like to draw because I can enjoy the freedom of creating when drawing. My dream is to be an artist because I am good at imagination and creating.
This is a brief introduction about myself . Hope you have a nice day.
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A Brief Introduction of A Boy
Hello, everyone! My name is Ryan. I live in Zhuwei in New Taipei City. I love Taiwan because Taiwan is very beautiful. I like to write stories very much. I can make up a world and all the characters in it by my self.myself. The whole process is very interesting. Besides, I also like to draw because I can enjoy the freedom of creating when drawing. My dream is to be an artist because I am good at imagination and creating.This is a brief introduction about myself . Hope you have a nice day.
AWESOME WORK! My only suggestion is that as your progress you improve the flow and transition of your sentences and thoughts so that they connect more fluidly. Nice job.
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