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Script for a ZEEMEE VIDEO Hi everybody, I wrote a script of presentation for my college application. Thank you for your corrections and comments ! "I practice languages because I love it. Practice a language for me is just a simple way to understand others, their cultures, their way of life. I have online correspondant and friends from all around the world, that brought me open-mindness. I'm fond of traveling, especially in the United States. My dream is to work in international communication in the US or in another English speaking country. Before to know the BBA Global Business you offer, I was thinking about start my 3 first year of college in France and then leave to study in an university abroad. The BBA GLobal Business match exactly with my desires, and permit to students to have an international experience in a university abroad very early. We discover the 3 continents, and from this experience, we learn to know different countries, different cultures, different people. And it's exactly what I was looking for. To conclude, I would say that languages and travels are very important to me. United states were a beautiful and tremendous experience, and from this moment, two years ago, I knew exactly who I wanted to be, what I wanted to do and where I wanted to live. My travels in the US definited my personality. My passions are dance and reading, classic and fantastic books. Thanks you for watching my ZEEMEE MEET ME VIDEO, I really hope you enjoy it and hope that now you know better who I am and who I want to be in the future. Kinds regards !"
15 янв. 2017 г., 16:42
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Script for a ZEEMEE VIDEO

Hi everybody,
I wrote a script of presentation for my college application. Thank you for your corrections and comments !

"I love to practice languages. Practicing a language is just a simple way to understand others, their cultures, and their way of life. I have online correspondants and friends from all around the world, that have made me more open-minded.
I'm fond of traveling, especially in the United States. My dream is to work in international communication in the US or in another English speaking country. Before I knew about the BBA Global Business offer, I was thinking about starting my  first year of college in France and then leaving to study at   a university abroad. The BBA Global Business matches exactly with my desire, and permits  students to have an early international experience at a university abroad.
As we discover the continents, we learn to know different countries, cultures and people. This is exactly what I am looking for.

To conclude, I would say that language and travel are very important to me. My visit to the United states was a beautiful and tremendous experience, and from that moment, two years ago, I knew exactly who I wanted to be, what I wanted to do and where I wanted to live. My travels in the US changed me and helped to define my goals. My passions are dancing and reading classic and fantastic books.

Thanks you for watching my ZEEMEE MEET ME VIDEO, I really hope you enjoy it and hope that now you know better who I am and who I want to be in the future. Kinds regards !"

Here are a few suggestions. I may have changed your meaning so please correct it as you desire. Also note that some words are deleted or changed and not highlighted in yellow.


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