Could you correct my entry, please)
How we created Christmas mood (Part 1)
1. We started with crafting knick-knacks. We cut paper snowflakes. We created a winter draw with a fir and gentle snowflakes around it.
And we made this awesome bauble.
2. We bought canned peas and corn with great discount. And we didn’t forget about mayonnaise for upcoming salads. Yummy, yummy!
3. We unpacked and set a Christmas tree.
4. We searched different Christmas ideas for the inspiration in the Internet.
We bought a fabric and lace for handcrafting.
5. We decorated our room with garlands and ornaments.
6. We sewed pretty kitchen towels.
7. Yuri demanded this cozy lamp was switched on every morning.
8. We continued to sew, this time there were Christmas tree ornamentations.
9. We checked, did we have all ingredients for cookies, “Oh, Goodness, we have a few flour. Let’s take a note “Buy flour!!!!” to remind about it.”
10. We bought metal boxes.
11. We needed molds for baking cookies, but there weren’t such pastry molds, so Yuri’s mom bought a set of kids molds.
12. We dried carved shapes which were made from mandarin peels.
13. We picked up twigs and sticks.
14. We continued to sew and count how much stuff we had already.
15. We put slices of lemon to an oven. It was a bad idea to dry lemons in the oven, so we devised another way.
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Could you correct my entry, please)
How we created a Christmas mood (Part 1)1. We started with by crafting knick-knacks. We cut paper snowflakes. We created a winter drawing with a twigs of fir and gentle snowflakes around it.
And we made this awesome bauble.
2. We bought canned peas and corn with at a great discount. And we didn’t forget about mayonnaise for upcoming salads. Yummy, yummy!
3. We unpacked and set up a Christmas tree.
4. We searched different Christmas ideas for the inspiration in on the Internet.
We bought a fabric and lace for handcrafting.
5. We decorated our room with garlands and ornaments.
6. We sewed pretty kitchen towels.
7. Yuri demanded this cozy lamp was switched on every morning.
8. We continued to sew, this time there were making Christmas tree ornamentsations.
9. We checked, did if we have had all the ingredients for cookies, “Oh, Goodness, we don't have a few much flour. Let’s take write a note “Buy flour!!!!” to remind us about it.”
10. We bought metal boxes.
11. We needed molds moulds for baking cookies, but there weren’t such pastry molds moulds, so Yuri’s mom bought a set of kids molds moulds.
12. We dried carved shapes which were made from mandarin peels.
13. We picked up twigs and sticks.
14. We continued to sew and count how much stuff we had already.
15. We put slices of lemon into an oven. It was a bad idea to dry lemons in the oven, so we devised another way.
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