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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am a sophomore in college. I am majoring in Technique and Instrumentation of Measurements,and minoring in marketing management. I like studying and thinking , I use most of my time studying. To know some foreign friends and study English, I registerd in web .

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a sophomore in college.
I am majoring in My Major is Technique and Instrumentation of Measurements,and minoring in marketing management.
I like to studying and to thinking and think about things. , I use spend most of my time studying.
To know some  I like to make friends from foreign friends and study countries and learn English from them1. I am registerd in web2 .

1.   This sentence is very awkward and confusing.  I added words to it to make things clearer from what can infer from it.  If this is not your intent, put in the correct thoughts into it.

2.  Web? the web is the internet itself and by saying you are registered on the web, you are confusing the reader.  You need to explain which website you are registered.  If you are registered on italki, then say so.

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