what does he look like?/ what is he like?
I want to introduce one of my brothers.In fact I have 2 brothers and one of them is my twin brother and the another one is one years older than me.
If i want to introduce my twin brother appearance I can say. He is a copy of me. we are looks like together very very much. He is tall and thin with big black eyes. He has short straight black hair too. He is a little thinner than me cause He have started to smokes cigarette since last year...
If i want to talk about his personality I can say. He is generous but not same as me. He is a little lazy because He usually get up late specially after he finished his master of science degree in chemical engineering. He can get along with people and I think he is more sociable person than me.I think he is extroverted. we are twin brothers bit we really have big difference in our personality. for example He like going to parties ,traveling and being with friends but I prefer to go to gym and sped more time with our family.
It can be great if someone help me to revise my essay. thank you
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what does he look like?/ what is he like?
I want to introduce one of my brothers. In fact I have two brothers, one of whom is my twin. The other one is one years older than me.If i want to describe my twin brother's appearance, I can say he is a copy of me. We are look very much alike. He is tall and thin with big black eyes. He has short, straight black hair too. He is a little thinner than me because he started to smokes cigarettes since last year...
If I want to talk about his personality, I can say, he is generous, but not the same as me. He is a little lazy because he usually gets up late, especially after he finished his master of science degree in Chemical Engineering. He can get along with people, and I think he is a more sociable person than me. I think he is extroverted. We are twin brothers, but we really have big differences in our personality. For example, he likes going to parties, traveling and being with friends, but I prefer to go to the gym and spend more time with our family.
It would be great if someone help me to revise my essay. Thank you
-You don't need to capitalize the pronoun 'he' unless it begins a sentence.
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What does he look like?/ What is he like?
I want to tell you about one of my brothers. In fact I have two brothers. and One of them is my twin brother and the other one is one years older than I [am].If I want to describe my twin brother's appearance, I can say: he is a copy of me. We look very alike. He is tall and thin, with big dark eyes. He has short straight black hair too. He is a little thinner than I am, because he started smoking last year.
If I want to talk about his personality, I can say: he is generous, but not as much as I [am]. He usually gets up late, because he is a little lazy, especially since he finished his master of science degree in chemical engineering. He gets along with people well and I think he is a more sociable person than I am.I think he is extroverted. We are twin brothers, but we really have very different personalities. For example, he likes going to parties, traveling, and being with friends, but I prefer to go to the gym and spend more time with our family.
It would be great if someone would help me to revise my essay. Thank you
Notes
You cannot "introduce" somebody unless they are physically present.
Be careful not to use the object pronoun "me" instead of the subject pronoun "I". When you are in doubt which to use, try adding the verb "am" to your sentence. This will make it clear which version is incorrect.
Very few people in the world actually have black eyes. It is possible to have eyes that are so dark that they look black, but they are normally dark brown.
Your brother is not lazy because he gets up late. He gets up late because he is lazy! ;)
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