Part 2

Finally, Guangzhou is a very opening, developed and modern city. Partly Actually, this city can represent the south of China. the This city combines with the beautiful natural sence scenery with and magnificent skyscrapers. 

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Well written Jack. Remember to leave a space after comma and period (, .).
Also, all new sentences after period ( . ) must start with capital letters.  
Proper nouns must always start with capital letters like Guangzhou, Guangdon etc.

Guangzhou 和 Guangdon 用汉字怎么写 ？

An Introduction of Guangzhou city, China

Guangzhou is the capital city in Guangdon province, and is also the largest cities in China. It has a very long history in trading to the world world trade. it is a very opening and international city. Walking in the city street, you can see many foreigners from around the world. There are three things I love in Guangzhou.

Firstly, eating in Guangzhou. There are many traditional Chinese food & delights in Guangzhou street corners, such as shuijiao(a dumpling with some meat in it), changfen(a flour with some juice on the surface）and so on！Above all, all of them are very cheap, and i think everybody everyone will enjoy it!

Secondly, it is very easy to feel the Chinese culture in this city. If you are interested in Chinese culture , you would better should visit Guangzhou. There are lot of historical tourist attractions in this city,which most of which them are relic , museum, park and so on. and Also, the transport is very convenient. Imaging that you can take a bus or share ing a bicycle and ride across around the whole city. That is so cool for you!Besides,all the tourist attractions have Chinese, Enhlish English and other languages, .so never mind the there is no language problem. It is very relaxing to travel there.

Part 1. I reached the correction limit. Will try to correct next paragraph in another post.