Pepita 2da base
I went to the movie theater and I watched a very funny Venezolan movie, its name is "papita 2da base". This movie is about a couple that love the baseball but they're really fan of their opposite team( she is fan of the Magallanes and he is of the Leones) and they always are making jokes and bullying each other all the time about their teams. Also the movie is great because the slang that the characters use is quite venezolan so it is too funny to hear those common words in a cinema also because there are not so much venezolan movies. Perhaps if you are thinking to visit Venezuela, you must watch this movie before
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Pepita 2da base
I went to the movie theater and I watched a very funny Venezolan Venezuelan movie. Its name is "papita 2da base". This movie is about a couple that love the baseball, but they're really fans of their opposite teams (BETTER: opposing teams)( she is fan of the Magallanes and he is of the Leones) and they always are making jokes and bullying* each other all the time about their teams. Also the movie is great because the slang that the characters use is quite venezolan Venezuelan so it is too so funny to hear those common words in a cinema also because there are not so much many venezolan Venezuelan movies. Perhaps if you are thinking to of visiting Venezuela, you must should** watch this movie before.*Bullying en inglés significa algo más grave y malicioso. Mejor sería "making fun of each other."
** Since you say "perhaps," "must" sounds strange. Without "perhaps" you could use "must" or "should."
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stylistic choices to sound more native
replacement words
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