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Alberto Rodríguez
Could you please tell me if there is anything wrong here? I’m going to speak about my dream vacation. The place conforms the Canary archipelago and it is one of the seven Canary Islands. People there are very friendly. If you are hungry you can eat something delicious, taste: “Conejo al salmorejo con Papas arrugadas”. Or if you are not hungry and you want to know more about this island you can go to “El Teide” which is a volcano where snows in winter; Siam Park is an aquatic park where you can have a lot of fun; Loro Parque is a zoo and other interesting place is the “Drago Milenario”, which is a big tree found only in this island. It is about 1.000 years. Maybe you don’t like these attractions and rather go to the beach. “Las Teresitas” is a beach with sand brought from the desert of Sahara and this is the only beach with sand in the island, others have rocks. If you don’t like the the beach and you like parties, in the towns, people make parties called “Romerias”; these are parades made to show the culture of the people who live there. With all of this said, you can probably guess the place where I’d like to go… Tenerife. I’d like to go to Tenerife because when I was 2 years old I went there but I don’t remember anything , so, It`d be an amazing chance to have that experience again and meet my cousins, aunts and uncles

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Could you please tell me if there is anything wrong here?

I am going to speak write about my dream vacation.
The place conforms forms part of the Canary Archipelago and it is one of the seven Canary Islands. The people there are very friendly.
If you are hungry you can eat something delicious and tasty: “Conejo al salmorejo con Papas arrugadas”. Or, if you are not hungry and you want to know more about this island you can go to “El Teide” which is a volcano where it snows in winter. Siam Park is an aquatic park where you can have a lot of fun. Loro Parque is a zoo and another interesting place is the “Drago Milenario”, which is a big tree found only on this island. It is about 1.000 years.
Maybe you don’t like these attractions and you would rather go to the beach. “Las Teresitas” is a beach with sand brought from the desert of Sahara desert and this is the only beach with sand on the island, the others have rocks. If you don’t like the beach and you like parties, in the towns, people make have parties called “Romerias”; these are parades made to that shows the culture of the people who live there.
With all of this said, you can probably guess the place where I would like to go… Tenerife.

I would like to go to Tenerife because when I was 2 years old I went there but I don’t remember anything, so, It would be an amazing chance/opportunity to have that experience again and meet my cousins, aunts and uncles.

Very well written, only small corrections required.


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