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The Tim じぁん!!!
It was sunny today. After school, my mom took me to a newly opened restaurant. It had a setup similar to a conveyor belt sushi spot, but with a fun twist: instead of sushi, the belt carried an endless variety of premium mini hot-pot ingredients. We sat at the counter, each of us with our own tiny pot, and just like at a sushi restaurant, we could grab whatever dishes caught our eye as they passed by. The whole experience reminded me of that famous sushi place with the lottery-style game where certain dishes trigger prizes, though sadly, this restaurant didn’t have anything like that. I wish they do it in the future.
10 апр. 2025 г., 13:02
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It was sunny today. After school, my mom took me to a newly opened restaurant. It had a setup similar to a conveyor belt sushi spot, but with a fun twist: instead of sushi, the belt carried an endless variety of premium mini hot-pot ingredients. We sat at the counter, each of us with our own tiny pot, and just like at a sushi restaurant, we could grab whatever dishes caught our eye as they passed by. The whole experience reminded me of that famous sushi place with the lottery-style game where certain dishes trigger prizes, though sadly, this restaurant didn’t have anything like that. I hope they do it in the future.
Beautiful writing! The only thing I would adjust is using "I hope" instead of "I wish." This is because wish is more for things that are impossible like "I wish I was taller!"
11 апреля 2025 г.
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It was sunny today. After school, my mom took me to a newly opened restaurant.
It had a setup similar to a conveyor belt sushi spot, but with a fun twist:
instead of sushi, the belt carried an endless variety of premium mini hot-pot
ingredients. We sat at the counter, each of us with our own tiny pot, and just
like at a sushi restaurant, we could grab whatever dishes caught our eye as they
passed by. The whole experience reminded me of that famous sushi place with the
lottery-style game where certain dishes trigger prizes, though sadly, this
restaurant didn’t have anything like that. I wish they do it in the future.
Sounds fun!
11 апреля 2025 г.
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The Tim じぁん!!!
Языковые навыки
китайский (путунхуа), английский, японский
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английский
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