Try to be more concise. You can in part do that be using richer verbs like “graduate” instead of “do.” “Presently” is understandable but not doesn’t sound natural to me. When you refer to the English language, you don’t need to write “language” because that is understood, but you do need to capitalize the word “English.” Check this out and the explanation on appositives: https://www.grammarly.com/blog/comma/