My hometown is close to Jiangxi province. In light of this fact，I prefer all the spicy food. Among these food，hotpot is my favorite. So I often hang out to eat hotpot with my friends. What a pleasant

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My hometown is close to Jiangxi province. In light of this fact，I prefer all the spicy food. Among these food，hotpot is my favorite. So I often hang out to eat hotpot with my friends. What a pleasant thing!!

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22 окт. 2020 г., 6:08

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My hometown is close to Jiangxi province. Because of this, I prefer spicy food. Among these foods，hotpot is my favorite. So I often hang out with my friends and eat hotpot. It's a pleasant thing to do!

You did really well but it just needed some corrections. I've written it in a way that is more commonly used. I hope this helps!

22 октября 2020 г.

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