1. social media can help on hiding real me, typing words behind screen is always easier than behaving properly in front of a real person 2. social media offer another way to know someone, you can read

July zhang

1. social media can help on hiding real me, typing words behind screen is always easier than behaving properly in front of a real person 2. social media offer another way to know someone, you can read his/her life and opinions through following him/her without or before meeting him/her in real life 3. social media enlarge your friend circle but may with a lower quality 4. social media can make boring life creative in some way, everyine can be the director of their life and share with others

25 окт. 2022 г., 8:19

Исправления · 2

1. Social media can be used to help hide the real person we are, as typing words behind screen is always easier than behaving properly in front of a real person. 2. Social media offers another way to know someone; you can read about their life and opinions by following them on social media without, or before, having met them in real life. 3. Social media enlarges your friend circle but this may come at the cost of the quality of your friendships. 4. Social media can add creativity to a seemingly boring life, and everyone can be the director of their own life and share it with others.

Nice points. Don’t forget to punctuate properly, and keep in mind that they/their/them can be used as singular pronouns when we don’t know the gender of the person we are talking about.

25 октября 2022 г.

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