can anybody check my grammar and vocab or the way i write ? My grandma and my grandpa were friend since they are young they were neighborhood but they began an officially date when they are 18, and they both married when my grandma was 20 and my granpa 21.and she had 5 child my father is her second child. And day by day she only live her life as a good housewife, and good mother. Before my father was born my grandma ever live hard because of the in 1949 there was a war, and my grandma ran away with a boat the boat sent them to a small island name tanjungpinang , after my father was born and the war already stopped they back to pekanbaru. When my grandma was 46 years old she opened a coffee shop, and not long after this business opening my grandpa wander lived outside and didn’t back for earned money, my grandma grew up her five child by herself for 10year,living on her own earning every single cent by her own hand.after that she came to tanjungpinang for looked my grandpa and lived with my grandpa she never forgot her duty as a housewife serve and take care of her husband, about the coffee shop she left for his younger son. My grandpa built his own business and it was a very success business but only for several years after several years my grandpa’s business bankrupt and their life turn into so much hard , but my grandma still stay beside him and keep gave him support , my grandma doesn’t afraid of hardship . Their life became so much simple,but blissful even that my grandpa didn’t success as once. When my grandpa was 84 he passed away , my grandma didn’t express her sadness she tried to be strong, and now my grandma is living with my parents and and me in tanjungpinang , she let me know that age only a number it doesn’t mean anything even that she almost 87 she still can do a lot of job like gardening and make pop ice or anything else.