is this sentence okay? understandable?
Gorgeous clothes and jewelry is the essential part of showing the culture of a country, whereas compared with other first ladies from different countries.
The first half is ok, perfectly understandable. I would change it to something like "Gorgeous clothes and jewelry are essential parts of showing the culture of a country"
I feel like the second part is leaving some information out. It feels weird
15 марта 2014 г.
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