I want to write a thank you note to my teacher and I need help with the grammar.
I've written this out (with some help from google translate) and I wanted to know how the grammar is.

亲爱黄老师，

非常感谢你为一个伟大的学期！我真的很喜欢你的类，因为我喜欢你的教学风格。

我学到了很多东西，我想继续学习中国的更多了。

再次感谢你，我希望你有很好的夏天！

-我的名字-

This is what I was trying to say:

Dear Ms. Huang,

Thank you so much for a great semester! I have really liked your class because I like your teaching style.

I have learned a lot, and I want to continue learning Chinese more now.

Thank you again and I hope you have a great summer!

-my name here-

Question

I want to write a thank you note to my teacher and I need help with the grammar.
I've written this out (with some help from google translate) and I wanted to know how the grammar is.

亲爱黄老师，

非常感谢你为一个伟大的学期！我真的很喜欢你的类，因为我喜欢你的教学风格。

我学到了很多东西，我想继续学习中国的更多了。

再次感谢你，我希望你有很好的夏天！

-我的名字-

This is what I was trying to say:

Dear Ms. Huang,

Thank you so much for a great semester! I have really liked your class because I like your teaching style.

I have learned a lot, and I want to continue learning Chinese more now.

Thank you again and I hope you have a great summer!

-my name here-

Answer

亲爱的黄老师：
感谢您带给我们这样一学期丰富多彩的学习生活。我真的很喜欢您的课，因为我特别喜欢您的教学风格。
我学到了好多东西，现在，我越来越渴望了解和学习更多的中文了！
再次感谢您！夏日愉快！

Answer

感谢你在这个学期的付出，我真的喜欢你的课，因为我很喜欢你的教学风格。
  我学到了很多，我想深入学习更多的中国文化。
  再次感谢你，希望您能过一个愉快的夏天

Answer

Please notice the word/phrase orders  in a sentence.Chinese doesn't have any subordinate claus and postpositional modifier.  e.g..我想继续学习中国的更多了。更多is the modifier,so it't can't be at the end of the sentence,modifier must be in front of the word that it is used to modify.correct:我想更多地学习中文了。／我想学习更多的中文了。They are both OK because 更多 can be an adv. or an adj..