Yujia Wong
Can we say “ I often nestle in the arms of her listening to her nursery rhymes quietly“? Does it sound natural? If not, please correct me. Thank you!
8 мар. 2015 г., 16:06
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It's pretty good. "Arms of her" is wrong, it should be "her arms." As written, it is in the present tense--you do it now. If you mean to put in the past tense--you did it when you were a child--it would be "I often nestleD in HER ARMS listening to her nursery rhymes quietly." That's correct and natural, but as a matter of style--other native speakers might NOT agree--I'd put in a comma and change the word order slightly:" "I often nestled in her arms, listening quietly to her nursery rhymes."
8 марта 2015 г.
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