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Jaime
IELTS part1: what is your favourite music
One of my favourite musics is XIAO BAI performed by Pakho Chow. Its lyrics is meaningful to me. It shows how much a little boy misses his dog which died for illness. This song reminds me of my dog that companied with me during my childhood and she died for illness either. I hope she will be happy in the heaven.
PS: How do you correct it to be more native. I think "It shows that..." not not proper here. There might be some better expression for it. And maybe conjointive or adv. should be used.
27 авг. 2015 г., 7:05
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One of my favourite songs is XIAO BAI performed by Pakho Chow. Its lyrics are meaningful to me. It shows how much a little boy misses his dog which died of an illness. This song reminds me of my dog that accompanied me during my childhood and she died of an illness too. I hope she will be happy in heaven.
Hello Jaime,
I'm sure that all animals are happy when they get to heaven, just like us. Just a few small corrections but your answer is fine. Was this a writing question or a speaking question?
Hope this helps
Bob
PS: How do you correct it to be more native. I think "It shows that..." not not proper here. There might be some better expression for it. And maybe conjointive or adv. should be used.
30 августа 2015 г.
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Jaime
Языковые навыки
китайский (путунхуа), китайский (кантонский), английский, немецкий, японский
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