Hello! If I´m writing an email asking for information is it correct to say: "I am writing to request further information about your course, as I am really interested in participating and the clarification of the following details. Firstly..."? I am writing to request further information about your course as I am really interested in enrolling. I would like to ask for clarification about the following details OR I would like to clarify certain points regarding: Firstly...

Hello , If I´m to write an email asking for information, is it correct to say, "I am writing to request further information about the course you are offering as I am really interested in it, but I need clarifications on the following details. Firstly.. ?" Please check the punctuations .