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HIROMI
Please correct my sentences.
:What is the most beautiful place you've ever been?
:Why isn't working this PC? Is anything damage?
:We knew each other from school.
:I'll be running tomorrow morning.
:We'll be able to drink after our 20th birthday in Japan.
:My boy friend is impatient. I'm cheerful.
:I was so depressed when my cat dead.
:Your girl friend gets jealous easily. If I meet u only us, she would be jealous of me.
:I'm optimistic. Sometimes my view is too optimistic.
:It's been a while since I heard from my mom.
:It had been a while since I heard from my mom.
:When is the expiry day?
:My phone will die after using more than 3 hours.
:Tons of people crowded the restaurant, so the restaurant so the restaurant was crowded.
:My neck is hurting. I'm in pain.
7 окт. 2016 г., 4:56
Ответы · 2
:What is the most beautiful place you've ever been?
where is the most beautiful place you've ever been?
:Why isn't working this PC? Is anything damage?
Why this PC doesn't work? Is something damaged?
:We knew each other from school.
We've known each other since school.
:I'll be running tomorrow morning.
I'm going to run tomorrow morning.
:We'll be able to drink after our 20th birthday in Japan.
We can drink after our 20th birthday in Japan.
:My boy friend is impatient. I'm cheerful.
My boyfriend is impatient. I'm cheerful.
:I was so depressed when my cat dead.
I was so depressed when my cat died.
:Your girl friend gets jealous easily. If I meet u only us, she would be jealous of me.
Your girlfriend gets jealous easily if we meet alone, she would be jealous of me.
:I'm optimistic. Sometimes my view is too optimistic.
I'm optimistic. Sometimes I'm too optimistic.
:It's been a while since I heard from my mom.
It's just been a while since I heard from my mom.
:It had been a while since I heard from my mom.
It had just been a while when I heard from my mom.
:When is the expiry day?
When is the expiry date?
:My phone will die after using more than 3 hours.
My phone dies after I use it more than 3 hours.
:Tons of people crowded the restaurant, so the restaurant so the restaurant was crowded.
Tons of people flooded to the restaurant, so the restaurant was crowded.
:My neck is hurting. I'm in pain.
My neck hurts. I feel pain in my neck.
I tried my best. if anything's wrong please correct it.
7 октября 2016 г.
What is the most beautiful place you've ever been?
What is the most beautiful place you've been? LESS CLUNKY
:Why isn't working this PC? Is anything damage?
:Why isn't this PC working? Is there any damage?
:We knew each other from school. Correct
We were classmates
We are classmates
we went to school together
:I'll be running tomorrow morning. TO WHERE??
:We'll be able to drink after our 20th birthday in Japan.
After we turn 20 years old, we will be able to drink alcohol in Japan
:My boy friend is impatient. I'm cheerful.
:My boy friend is impatient, but, I'm a patient person.
:I was so depressed when my cat dead.
Wen my cat died, I was so depressed.
:Your girl friend gets jealous easily. If I meet u only us, she would be jealous of me.
:Your girl fgt so jealous. When we meet she she is jealous of me
:I'm optimistic. Sometimes my view is too optimistic.
I'm optimistic, sometimes, I am way too Optimistic
:It's been a while since I heard from my mom. - CORRECT
:It had been a while since I heard from my mom. CORRECT
:When is the expiry day?
What's the expiration Date?
:My phone will die after using more than 3 hours.
My phone will die if I use more than 3 hours. - correct
Tons of people crowded the restaurant, so the restaurant so the restaurant was crowded.
The restaurant was very crowded because tons of people decided to dine there. correct
:My neck is hurting. I'm in pain. (this is okay)
I am in so much pain because my neck is hurting. correct
7 октября 2016 г.
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