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humayun

Native English speakers PLEASE help. what do you think about the structure? - Pondering the issue meticulously one will come to realize that money is more important than love!

30 нояб. 2016 г., 19:50

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The structure is fine, I just think there should be a comma between the two clauses. Pondering the issue meticulously, one will come to realize that money is more important than love! Very high level language. Nice work!

30 ноября 2016 г.

This is fine. It is a more complex and academic sentence structure, but perfectly understandable.

30 ноября 2016 г.

Pondering the issue meticulously, he realized that money is more important than love! To ponder an issue meticulously, one will come to realize that.....,

30 ноября 2016 г.

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