安德烈 (Andrea)
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We two or The two of us? Hi, merely from a point of view of the style and what it can convey (we are talking about the title of a poem) what is for you the difference between: WE TWO and THE TWO OF US ? here's my poem: We two or The two of us Let’s stay here in the marvelous embrace of our bodies. Let’s stay here, still and waiting for the passing that will sanctify our union in eternity. I prefer "we two" but I need the opinion of native speakers, thank you.
29 апр. 2019 г., 10:05
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Yes, I agree with Benjamin. Nice poem. I think either title works, but I also like Entwined, as Benjamin suggests. Perhaps the word TWO suggests separation. The TWO become ONE. What about a title suggesting unity/oneness/a sort of coalescnce? I'm useless at titles so I won't suggest one!
29 апреля 2019 г.
Nice poem! Both titles are suitable. I prefer 'We two' as well. I'd have called it 'Entwined'
29 апреля 2019 г.
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