Would you like tell me whether it be used in real work?
以下内容都是我写的，不知道这个程度（指英文），能用于实际工作否？
Following text is written by me. I don't sure that whether it can be used in a real work ? (in English)

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I have also hesitated to the use of the word group “model-driven”, and have considered such as model-based, model-centric, model-oriented, and so on. A reason that makes me hesitate is the meaning which “to make somebody move”, but a model itself seemingly is not an initiative or active role.
对于模型驱动这个词组的使用，我也曾经犹豫不决，并考察过诸如基于模型、以模型为中心、面向模型等等。使我犹豫的一个原因，就是它“驱使某人做某事”的意义，而模型本身看来似乎并非一种主动性或活动的角色。

After all, I adhere to the use of “model-driven” is based on the following reasons:
最终坚持使用模型驱动一词，主要有以下理由：

The First, the primary usage as ‘drives a vehicle’, which has similar issue. To be driven by some one, in fact, only makes the behavior of a car in control, but the role made the car moving is played by engine. I found that a model can control a system (the functionality, behavior, maybe partially) in a similar way; I called as model-driven mechanism.
其一，其基本含义交通工具的驾驶，同样有类似的问题。所谓“驾驶”，实际上只是在“控制”汽车的行为方式，而使汽车移动的角色是发动机。我发现，模型可以用相似的方式控制一个系统（其功能、行为，或许是部分的），我称之为“模型驱动机制”。

The Second, I understand that an animal as an independent system, which is driven by its own brain – the content of brain, the essence, is model I think. A brain (with the “peripheral equipment”) is an advanced form of information system which is model-driven.
其二，我理解，动物作为一个独立的系统，它是由自己的大脑驱动的——大脑的内容，其本质实质，就是模型。大脑（联同其“外部设施”）是信息系统的高级形式。

The Third, the rise of MDA... I found that the model-driven mechanism actually the elemental of MDA. In other words, the use of this word group is consistent. (This is not a literal understanding, and then I will further explain it.)
其三，MDA的兴起。我发现模型驱动机制，实际上也是MDA的基本原理，换言之，对这一词组的用法是一致的。（这一点并非字面上的理解，以后我将进一步加以解释）

In conclusion, my understanding of model-driven is derived from “change on demand” for applications, which I regarded it as an essential requirement that come from the end customers of enterprise applications.
综合而言，我对于“模型驱动”的理解是源于应用软件随需而变的需求，我将它看作一种来自企业应用最终客户的实质性需求。
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note: MDA - Model-Driven Architecture I expect your comment, thanks a lot!

Question

Would you like tell me whether it be used in real work?
以下内容都是我写的，不知道这个程度（指英文），能用于实际工作否？
Following text is written by me. I don't sure that whether it can be used in a real work ?  (in English)

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I have also hesitated to the use of the word group “model-driven”, and have considered such as model-based, model-centric, model-oriented, and so on. A reason that makes me hesitate is the meaning which “to make somebody move”, but a model itself seemingly is not an initiative or active role. 
对于模型驱动这个词组的使用，我也曾经犹豫不决，并考察过诸如基于模型、以模型为中心、面向模型等等。使我犹豫的一个原因，就是它“驱使某人做某事”的意义，而模型本身看来似乎并非一种主动性或活动的角色。 

After all, I adhere to the use of “model-driven” is based on the following reasons: 
最终坚持使用模型驱动一词，主要有以下理由： 

The First, the primary usage as ‘drives a vehicle’, which has similar issue. To be driven by some one, in fact, only makes the behavior of a car in control, but the role made the car moving is played by engine. I found that a model can control a system (the functionality, behavior, maybe partially) in a similar way; I called as model-driven mechanism. 
其一，其基本含义交通工具的驾驶，同样有类似的问题。所谓“驾驶”，实际上只是在“控制”汽车的行为方式，而使汽车移动的角色是发动机。我发现，模型可以用相似的方式控制一个系统（其功能、行为，或许是部分的），我称之为“模型驱动机制”。 

The Second, I understand that an animal as an independent system, which is driven by its own brain – the content of brain, the essence, is model I think. A brain (with the “peripheral equipment”) is an advanced form of information system which is model-driven. 
其二，我理解，动物作为一个独立的系统，它是由自己的大脑驱动的——大脑的内容，其本质实质，就是模型。大脑（联同其“外部设施”）是信息系统的高级形式。 

The Third, the rise of MDA... I found that the model-driven mechanism actually the elemental of MDA. In other words, the use of this word group is consistent. (This is not a literal understanding, and then I will further explain it.) 
其三，MDA的兴起。我发现模型驱动机制，实际上也是MDA的基本原理，换言之，对这一词组的用法是一致的。（这一点并非字面上的理解，以后我将进一步加以解释） 

In conclusion, my understanding of model-driven is derived from “change on demand” for applications, which I regarded it as an essential requirement that come from the end customers of enterprise applications. 
综合而言，我对于“模型驱动”的理解是源于应用软件随需而变的需求，我将它看作一种来自企业应用最终客户的实质性需求。 
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note: MDA - Model-Driven Architecture I expect your comment, thanks a lot!

Answer

The sentences you have created seem understandable, you may have some spots where the grammar is a little off but as a whole it seems pretty professional.