I would like you to rate this short eassay on a scale of one to ten in terms of quality and grammar. This needs to be written within 60 to 80 words, so the shortness of it is fine. I believe peopl

Lisa

I would like you to rate this short eassay on a scale of one to ten in terms of quality and grammar. This needs to be written within 60 to 80 words, so the shortness of it is fine. I believe people would be using flying cars to travel in thirty years. The idea of a flying car has always fascinated people, and many have been trying to create one. I believe flying cars would become available in the near future, and since they would be a very fast and easy way to travel, it would be popular in thirty years.

22 февр. 2024 г., 12:44

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I would like you to rate this short eassay on a scale of one to ten in terms of quality and grammar. This needs to be written within 60 to 80 words, so the shortness of it is fine. I believe people will be using flying cars to travel in thirty years time. (OK) The idea of a flying car has always fascinated people, and many have been trying to create one. (OK) I believe flying cars will become available in the near future (this repeats the first sentence) , and since they would be a very fast and easy way to travel, (OK) they will be popular in thirty years.(repetition, although it is a sort of conclusion)

Some confusion between will/would but generally the grammar and vocab are ok. You just lose marks for repetition. Maybe 7/10 depending on the marking scheme.

22 февраля 2024 г.

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