Could you kindly correct the sentence below?🙇 Anxiety itself, which can be said to be a certain internal personal problem, does no harm to others. However, from a historical perspective, we cannot d

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Could you kindly correct the sentence below?🙇 Anxiety itself, which can be said to be a certain internal personal problem, does no harm to others. However, from a historical perspective, we cannot deny that anxiety has played a major role in conflicts and wars since the dawn of our existence. We are fully aware that weapons can lead to wreaking havoc, even when we are in dire need of peace and political stability. Ironically, the sense of anxiety and the aspiration for peace have inclined to cause tens of thousands of casualties around the world.

31 окт. 2023 г., 13:43

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Anxiety itself, which can be considered as a rather personal / private issue, does no harm to others. However, from a historical perspective, we cannot deny that anxiety has played a major role in conflicts and wars since the dawn of our existence / since the dawn of time. We are fully aware that weapons can lead to massive destruction and collateral damages even though we are in dire need of peace and political stability. Ironically, the feeling of anxiety and the aspiration for peace have led to tens of thousands of casualties around the world.

“To incline” is more like to push => to incline somebody to do something. Don’t confuse the verb with the noun: “inclination”, to have a natural inclination to do something means to have a natural tendency to do something for example.

31 октября 2023 г.

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