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Good evening! Please check my report! Today I’m going to talk about something that is very important to me. I have piano in my house. I think the piano is very important to me. When I was 5 years old, I started playing the piano. My friend's mother taught me how to play the piano because she graduated from the college of music. When I decided to start playing the piano, I went to buy a piano with my family. At first, I wanted a white piano, but I bought a brown one. I love this brown piano now. When I was in elementary school, I accompanied the graduation chorus. I have grown up with the piano. If I play a song that I used to play, I can remember how I was then. The sound of the piano is relaxing, and even if something bad happens, I feel better when I’m playing the piano. I kept learning the piano until I prepared for the university entrance exam, but I still refresh myself by playing the piano about three times a week. In conclusion, the piano is like my friend heal my heart, and expresses my mind. So, the piano is very important to me.
13 нояб. 2023 г., 13:15
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Good evening! Please check my report! Today I’m going to write about something that is very important to me. I have a piano at home. It is very important to me. When I was 5 years old, I started playing the piano. My friend's mother taught me how to play because she graduated from the college of music. When I decided to start playing the piano, I went to buy one with my family. At first, I wanted a white piano, but I bought a brown one. I love this brown piano now. When I was in elementary school, I accompanied the graduation chorus. I have grown up with the piano. If I play a song that I used to play, I can remember how I was then. The sound of the piano is relaxing, and even if something bad happens, I feel better when I’m playing the piano. I kept learning to play until I prepared for the university entrance exam, but I still practice by playing about three times a week. In conclusion, the piano is like my friend, it heals my heart, and expresses my mind that's why the piano is very important to me.
13 ноября 2023 г.
Good evening! Please check my report! Today I’m going to talk about something that is very important to me. I have a piano in my house. I think the piano is very important to me. When I was 5 years old, I started playing the piano. My friend's mother taught me how to play the piano because she graduated from the college of music. When I decided to start playing the piano, I went to buy a piano with my family. At first, I wanted a white piano, but I bought a brown one. I love this brown piano now. When I was in elementary school, I accompanied the graduation chorus. I have grown up with the piano. If I play a song that I used to play, I can remember how I was then. The sound of the piano is relaxing, and even if something bad happens, I feel better when I’m playing the piano. I kept learning the piano until I prepared for the university entrance exam, but I still refresh myself by playing the piano about three times a week. In conclusion, the piano is like my friend, it heals my heart, and expresses my thoughts So, the piano is very important to me. Well done! A nice piece of writing :)
13 ноября 2023 г.
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