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Karem
Hello everyone my name is Karem. I am still student .my day start every morning ,I have a lot of lectures from 8 a.m until 5 p.m , after that I trying to take a rest and surfing the internet. In the evening I meet friends and we play football. The last thing I like to do before I go to sleep read some books and trying to improve my self to better .
18 янв. 2021 г., 21:09
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Hello everyone my name is Karem. I am still student .my day start every morning , I have a lot of lectures from 8 a.m until 5 p.m, after that I trying to take a rest and surfing the internet. In the evening I meet friends and we play football. The last thing I like to do before I go to sleep read some books and trying to improve myself better than yesterday.
18 января 2021 г.
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Hello everyone my name is Karem. I am still a student. My day starts every morning (1), I have a lot of lectures from 8 a.m. until 5 p.m., after that I try to take a rest and surf the internet. In the evening I meet friends and we play football. The last thing I like to do before I go to sleep is to read some books and try to improve myself (2).
(1) Most people’s day starts every morning! I would leave this bit out. Or say something like “My day starts with breakfast, then I have a lot of lectures...”. (2) This sounds odd on its own. What are you trying to improve about yourself? Do you mean learning new things or reading in English or something like that?
18 января 2021 г.
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