This morning, I woke to sunshine glimmering through the trees in front of my rental house. The shadows of its leaves danced upon my blanket as a gentle breeze passed over. I love this beauty. I promise myself to rise up earlier no matter how late I am up the night before, and no matter how great may be my desire for sleep. "awoken", not "waken" "rental", not "rent" The leaves "danced". They didn't "shadow". "breeze blew by", not "getting by". "To get by" is a special idiom - look it up. rise up "earlier" than what?

This morning, I was woken up by the sunlight shining through the leaves of the trees in front of my rental house. Their shadows danced on the blanket when there was a breeze. I love this beauty. I promise myself to get up earlier no matter how late I stayed up the night before and how big my desire for sleep is.

This morning, I was woken up by the sunlight shining through the leaves of the tall trees in front of my rental house. The shadows of the leaves were dancing on the blanket as there was a little breeze blowing. I love this beauty. I promised myself to wake up earlier no matter how late I stayed up the night before and how hard I want to stay in bed.

This morning, I was woken up by the sunlight shining through the leaves of the tall trees in front of my rental house. The shadows of the leaves danced on the blanket when there was a little breeze blowing. I love this beauty. I promise myself to get up earlier, no matter how late I stay up the night before, or how great the desire to sleep is.