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Suzuka Taira
Hello, everyone!
I went to eat ice cream with my friends today. It's so hot in Japan these days that I want to eat ice cream every day. I especially like chocolate mint ice cream. Because you can feel the refreshing feeling of mint. Which flavor do you like?
Do you have a recommended ice cream shop in your country? 🍨 I wrote a lot about ice cream in my recent post lol. I think it's good to eat delicious food when you are tired from tasks and part-time jobs. Let's all do our best this week!
Thank you.
8 июня 2021 г., 11:35
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Hello, everyone!
I went to eat ice cream with my friends today. It's so hot in Japan these days that I want to eat ice cream every day. I especially like chocolate mint ice cream because you can feel the refreshing feeling of mint. Which flavor do you like?
Do you have a recommended ice cream shop in your country? 🍨 I wrote a lot about ice cream in my recent post lol. I think it's good to eat delicious food when you are tired from tasks and part-time jobs. Let's all do our best this week!
Thank you.
Pretty much perfect, Well done.
8 июня 2021 г.
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Hello, everyone!
I went to eat ice cream with my friends today. It's so hot in Japan at the moment that I want to eat ice cream every day. I especially like chocolate mint ice cream because the mint is so refreshing. Which flavor do you like?
Do you have a recommended ice cream shop in your country? 🍨 I wrote a lot about ice cream in my recent post lol. I think it's good to eat delicious food when you're tired from tasks and part-time jobs. Let's all do our best this week!
Thank you.
Great writing, well done! I love mint choc chip ice cream too, I would happily eat it every day, even when it's really cold! I hope you find my corrections useful. Please let me know if you have any questions about them :-)
8 июня 2021 г.
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Suzuka Taira
Языковые навыки
английский, японский
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английский
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