Mu nephew is so lovely and adorable. When I start to play with him and blaming him for something, he regret stating : do you love me? He is 3 years, and when I hear this words I melt. Especially that

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Anto Ci

Mu nephew is so lovely and adorable. When I start to play with him and blaming him for something, he regret stating : do you love me? He is 3 years, and when I hear this words I melt. Especially that days off, these words are going to make a change. It’s so nice and I love it.

27 сент. 2021 г., 14:35

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My nephew is so lovely and adorable. When I start playing with him and blaming him for something, he feels guilty and asks, "do you love me?" He is 3 years old and when I hear his words, my heart melts, especially when I am having a bad day. His words to make a change. It’s so nice and I love it.

27 сентября 2021 г.

My nephew is so lovely and adorable. When I start to tease him and blame him for something, he says, “Do you love me?” He is three years old, and when I hear him say this, I melt. It’s so cute and I love it.

Hi Anto, your nephew sounds so cute ☺️ Have a look at my corrections for some suggestions of alternate words and phrasing. I wasn’t quite sure what your meant by this sentence here: “Especially that days off, these words are going to make a change.” If you can explain to me what you meant, then I can help you find a better way of writing it. Good work 👍🏻

27 сентября 2021 г.