Could you check my English? I didn't feel like cooking, so I ate instant ramen. However, I was still hungry, so after all I cooked fried chicken and ate it. Sometimes I hate myself eating unhealthy f

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Could you check my English? I didn't feel like cooking, so I ate instant ramen. However, I was still hungry, so after all I cooked fried chicken and ate it. Sometimes I hate myself eating unhealthy food too much.

22 февр. 2024 г., 14:50

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Could you check my English? Ofcourse! I didn't feel like cooking, so I ate instant ramen instead. However, I was still hungry, so after all I cooked fried chicken and ate it. Sometimes I hate myself for eating unhealthy food too much.

Your spelling is really good! And there's just one small mistake where you forgot one word (i also do that sometimes 😅) I do though think i would have used another phrase instead of "so after all I cooked fried chicken and ate it". I think I would have said this instead "So I ended up cooking fried chicken too." But it depends on what type of person you are when you speak, so thats the reason for why I didn't correct that part! Good Job! 👍

23 февраля 2024 г.

Could you check my English? I didn't feel like cooking, so I ate instant ramen. However, I was still hungry, so I cooked fried chicken and ate it. Sometimes I hate myself for eating unhealthy food too much.

Fried chicken is tasty! :)

22 февраля 2024 г.

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