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It's St. Patrick's Day. I spent the day relaxing at home with the best company – my MeeMaw! We even got crafty, snipping out a whole bunch of shamrocks from paper, coloring and turning them into makeshift badges with tape. Consider everyone I meet today officially shamrock-ified! Speaking of green things, I can't wait to dig into that Guinness Beef pie later. If I remember correctly, it was a little greenish, probably been added pesto. Dad even skipped lunch in anticipation! Happy St. Patrick's Day to you!

17 мар. 2024 г., 9:28

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It's St. Patrick's Day. I spent the day relaxing at home with the best company – my MeeMaw! We even got crafty, snipping out a whole bunch of shamrocks from paper, coloring and turning them into makeshift badges with tape. Consider everyone I meet today officially shamrock-ified! Speaking of green things, I can't wait to dig into that Guinness Beef pie later. If I remember correctly, it was a little greenish, probably with added pesto. Dad even skipped lunch in anticipation! Happy St. Patrick's Day to you!

Have a great day!

17 марта 2024 г.

It's St. Patrick's Day. I spent the day relaxing at home with the best company – my MeeMaw! We even got crafty, snipping out a whole bunch of shamrocks from paper, coloring them, and turning them into makeshift badges with tape. Consider everyone I meet today officially shamrock-ified! Speaking of green things, I can't wait to dig into that Guinness Beef pie later. If I remember correctly, it had a slightly greenish hue, probably from added pesto. Dad even skipped lunch in anticipation! Happy St. Patrick's Day to you!

The grammar in the passage is mostly correct, but there are a few improvements that could be made for clarity and correctness. Changes Made: - Added a comma after "coloring" for clarity. - Clarified "probably been added pesto" to "probably from added pesto" for better grammar. - Changed "it was" to "it had" for smoother flow and correctness.

17 марта 2024 г.

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