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Today is rainy day. I was delay but made it to class!! I didn't bring my lunch today, so I bought a 400 yen hamburger at the purchase. It was delicious!! When I left the college, the rain had stopped and it was very hot. Also, It was very sunny, so I thought I should have brought sunscreen.
25 июня 2025 г., 5:58
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Today is rainy. I was delayed but made it to class! I didn't bring my lunch today, so I bought a 400 yen hamburger at the canteen/shop. It was delicious! When I left college, the rain had stopped and it was very hot and sunny, so I should have applied/worn sunscreen.
25 июня 2025 г., 11:46
Today is a rainy day. I was delayed but made it to class!! I didn't bring my lunch today, so I bought a 400 yen hamburger at the purchase. It was delicious!! When I left the college, the rain had stopped and it was very hot. Also, It was very sunny, so I thought I should have brought sunscreen.
Wow, the weather changed so quickly! 🧠 Becareful with your articles like "a rainy day" and your past tense. - Teacher Dani 🌷
25 июня 2025 г., 9:03
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