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Good morning i call to witness to what happened the 25th of december. well i'm very affraid to speak about this story. It began the 24th of december, it was 12:00 when i saw the fight beetween docteur hornet and thomas junior. Then i saw thomas junior leaved the house at 12:15. To 2:00 at 4:00 pm dr hornet was in his study with his associate eddie blackbird. Later, at 6:oo pm Emily hornet was drinking a tea with a friend. Jennie lovelace passed out while serving dinner at 7:30 pm. The 25th at 2:10 i heard a gun shot in the study who was in front of my home. So i came the must fast possible. well. i was very shocked to see that. The corpse of doctor hornet was on the floor. and next to the corpse there was a pochet contening a cinéma card and a big buns. he was in a room made up of a living room and a desk. there was a glass on the table. A gate led to an other room where i saw an apple and a shoez. when i discovered this scene awfull i was very saddened .

as for me, the murderer may have killed docter hornet because the fight of the day before, i think that docter hornet may have came back home the 25 th and on the night thomas must have enter by the window because there are fingerprints next to the window. And when he entered he was drunking alcool while docter hornet was in the room eating an apple. After to kill him he had 10 minutes to leave the home before that the police be there. And at 5 :30 he returned to the home to appear innocent.

19 февраля 2015 г.
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correction svp voy a presentar mi pasatiempo preferido, primero voy a hablar de lo que hace cuando estoy a casa, en secundo cuando estoy fuera, para comiencar cuando hay un momento libre, me encanta, navegar por internet, sobre en el movil, me chifla mandar mes, encendo raremente la television, porque prefiero ver peliculas en el ordenador:de amor y thriller por ejemplo me gusta tres metros sobre el cielo, gossip girl, n'oublie jamais... al contrario no me apasionan las peliculas de horo menos cuando estoy con amigos o familia . escucho todo tiempo musica , me gusta todas las typos de musicos menos el funk el rock y el electric, . despues, cuando estoy fuera, me chifla ir a restaurantes, con amigos o primas.hay una cosa que me gusta particularmente que es de ir a tolosa en mi hermano a tolosa por ir de tiendas. cuando estoy en fiestas me mola mucho bailar, y profitar. soy un poco deportiva y tiengo una preferencia para las deportivos de equipa como el baloncesto. ya esta
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can you correct my text plz Dear tess boutin, my name is Henry and i'm the pupil who you will host. I'm 17 years old and i'm very exited to come to New York, it was my dream when i was a child and it is also today. In my family we are 4 and my little brother Paul is very jealous of my travell. I told him that i will buy him a gift. It's a golden opportunity to go to New yORK .. I saw the picture of your family and you are all beautiful. It will be the first travell to the united states of America and i hope that it will be very fun. My hobbie is to play to the guitar, I'm passionate. I would like to take it when i will come at home. I also like the literature and i think it will be a good idea to spend time in your book club miss boutin. My favorite sport is the swimming, i feel good when i'm swimming. It's let me to destress and to think to anothers things. I would like to see the statue of Liberty, it is a statue very famous in France, we will take a picture together ! I would also like to visit central parc, i knew this parc thanks to a cartoon ! To visit many museums, know many english artists. And the must important thing who i have to do is to improve my level in the english language, one of my dream would be to speak english like an english! I hope that we will eat in restaurants to know the tipycal food of New york. Say hello to all the familly and see you soon! Yours sincerely Henry
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