necesito que alguien me corrija esto el tema de la redacion es abre tu mente viajando
I think that travel have a lot of adventages
You can improving the language , you can have many experience with another culture or meet new people.
Travelling abroad is one of the best and most enriching experiences that every student can have , noy only lear languages from the best , but also know other cultures , other people , and learn to speak fluently and handle yourself in a myriad of situation
In addition to personal enrichment , we must not forget the academi enrichment and language that today is almost essencial to finding a job that deserves aome punishment , especially if that language is english