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Note [The Tokyo Gas Attack in 1995]
Please help me to correct my essay>< I tried my best to fix simple errors but I'm not pretty sure about grammars><
This is the first paragraph of my research paper about The Tokyo GAs Attack.
If you are familiar with essays or MLA format, please teach me some rules that I definitely should know.
More than 5000 people had injured and 12 people had killed by the Tokyo underground sarin gas attack in 1995.(Watt, 569) This very first biochemical terroristic attack that happened in the capital of Japan shocked all over the world and illuminated terror of an alternative biochemical indiscriminate terrorist attack. Tokyo was considered as a highly secure country, however, this terrorism attack caused to consider about security to raise caution for domestic terrorism and strength security for the domestic terrorism attack. To figure out what extent did the Tokyo gas attack of 1995 influence Japan’s approach to security, this summative will identify security and compare the security structures before and after the gas attack with the understanding of Japanese cultural socio-psychological features. An analysis of Tokyo gas attack reveals the issue in Japan’s security: lack of security enforcement to against terroristic attack, very collective mindset as cultural code, a strong band of hierarchy by social positions.
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Is it better to enjoy your money or is it better to save the money for the future?-Toefl
It is always difficult to take balance how much you want to spend and how much you save in bank. Although, there is people who doesn't save money to enjoy the moment of life, it is wiser to save money in bank. To support this idea, I'm going talk about two main points. First, for the time when you need big amount of money in the future. Second, You can earn interests when you save a mount of money in bank.
Primary, in life time there is some events that you have to prepare large money such as marriage, traveling or the tuition for the university. When that time has come to you, you have to be able to pay them otherwise you will get a loan. Loan is little bit tricky because the money you have to pay will increase by time pass. While you have loan, you have to save most of your income just for earlier settlement. In my experience, there are many people who fail to pay their loan because they didn't save enough money in bank. In other words, if you had saved enough money in bank, you may be able to pay when it's necessary. So saving money will give you more opportunity for wealthy life with many interesting events, therefore, I prefer to save some money to prepare for some time in the future.
Secondary, when you save a number of money, you can earn interests from the bank. Each bank has multiple option to choose the type of interest. So you are possible to choose best option that fit to your situation and income. Interest may seems like nothing big deal, however, longer you save money in the bank the interest will increase and it will become enough to help you to be able to get more opportunity to be successful.
In conclusion, I prefer save some money in bank for your enjoyable life and earn some extra money out of money you have. I believe, to be more successful in your life, saving money is the first step.
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Why some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? -Toefl Essay
Thrill and Pleasure
There is always number of people who attracted in dangerous sports or activities such as skydiving, rock climbing or car race. In my opinion, the reason of dangerous sports attractiveness is because when people feel thrill, that brings sense of alive and pleasure. Sometimes thrilling activities helps to reduce mental stress.
To began with the thrilling activities and pleasure. While people playing sports, their hart beat get faster and blood stream increase. Also thrill will brings fast heat beats as well as sports. The physical settlement provide the brain to produce a chemical, call adrenaline. Adrenaline is the main factor of people to feel excitement and pleasure and the reason for attractiveness or addictiveness of dangerous sports. My own experience is a good example of this. I go to snowboarding since I was ten years old. In that time, snowboardings are most thrilling and exciting activity since sometime I lost control. That thrill made me sweat and beating heart but at same time I feel some sort of pleasure.
Almost every person has those experience because it is the natural function of our body. Therefore people are attracted to dangerous sports.
Secondly, dangerous activities helps get rid of persons stress and worry. Many dangerous activities requires large settings such as mountains or ocean. The unusual setting helps to forget about stress and worries of daily life and flesh air will make your feeling better. Back to my experience of snowboarding, while i focusing on the dangerous situation, there was no time to think about my problems. And the icy air of winter mountain cleaned my mind. That help me to rethink about all conflicts in school and home works much calmly. The unusual situation helps people to change their perspective and reduce stress when they are focusing on dangerous activity.
In conclusion, people are attracted by dangerous sports and activities because it produce excitement and reduce stress by putting themselves into unusual situation.
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Long time no post on Italki...
I feel kinda nervous by posting this but hope someone very nice fix the errors><
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How can I improve my speaking skill for TOEFL??
I want to improve my pronounce and skill to develop critical thinking in short time. What is the most affective way to practice them?
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Writing a short story...
I gatta write a short story for hw...
Pls help me to fix!!
It's a baking hot day. I cannot see people on the street, it's too hot to walk outside,It's crazy. Recently, I'm not in mood to move from my room, I don't know the reason though. Aww...I feel like my brain is melting out from my ear. Tease dais temperature is so high and never go down. I hope I have friends to go swimming or eat ice together, It might change this feeling that makes me so tired and bard but My family just move here two weeks ago and my new school is in the summer brake so I haven't meet my new school mates yet.
"Aaaashley!! Come down here. It's already one thirty. Let's have lunch together." Mom yelled from down steers. This is one thing that I don't like here. Her voice is scratching my brain.
"Ashley~! Aaaaashhhhley!!!"
".....Okay! Okay!! I will go down soon!"
Nagonia is a nice and conformable town and here is a lot of plants and makes this town looks beautiful. However it can't make me feel better. Even my birthday is coming in two days but My feeling tells me it going to be awful one.
Knock! Knock!
Something knocked the window near my bed so i looked at it. There was a white cat sitting by the window. It has silver left eye and gold right eye, It was staring at me for while and scratch on window.
"Hey!? wait's that mean Cat!!"
Usually popular looking good people don' t care of ugly people and it's also fit to cat. I figure out about it and it made me felt more miserable. I finally decided to go down stairs for eat lunch to forget this creepy cat. So wake up really slowly on bed. This is the story of the boring girl.
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First time!
Its very first time to write notebook here><
I just finishet set up my profile!! If you have interest to me please chack it~
Oh, I hope somebody teach me how to fix my pictuer plobrem.... It's up side down and I can't fix it><
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