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My first enlighs self-introduction, Please check me!
Hello, My name is Youngrim Park and I am in my late twenties.
My job is a seafarer. I have worked at a shipping company for 3 years.
Whitin a year, Normally I work on board 9 months and take a vacation(rest?) 3 months.
I know that my job is uncommon for woman and challenging.
But I love my job because it give me many chances to go abroad.
I live in a detached house with my family.
There are 6 people in my family : My grandmother, My father, My mother, My aunt, My brother and me.
I think I am a hot-temperd person. So, my friends often tell me "calm down".
I like to do exercise. Thus, In my vacation, I go to the gym near my house everyday.
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The first time I traveled abroad was when I was a junior at university.
My university is sending most third grade students abroad by unversity's ship every year.
I went to Osaka in Japan at that time.
Of course, I went there with my classmates.
There were a lot of tourist attractions.
The most memorable place is big traditional castle named 'Osaka castle'.
We also tried many local foods.
During the tirp, I took a lot of pictures. and nowdays I sometimes see them to revive a memory.
Thank you for reading my sentence, Have a good day :D
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I enjoy traveling abroad.
before a trip, i usually make a itinerary. it make me save the time and don't be confused.
I make sure to bring my cell-phone. Because it would be a map, a camera and a music playar while I travel.
Thank you for read my sentence and please teach me~.
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