Proofreading 2:Criticism Criticism of XU' work： XU has good visual imagination and image-building abilities .She is one of the photographers, the shot of boy's coming is designed, the mosquitos in the roof reflects the mood of the character , the lights in the mirror constructs a kaleidoscopic dream, and when the girl is climbing on the hillside are good ones. Meanwhile, the scene she dancing with the boy at the stairs is so shaking, and the last shot, I understand what she wants to express while the result is not ideal. I believe she could do better with some professional study and better equipment. About the music, it’s all her own taste thing, but I feel it is a little bit too much, can be better. Last flaw is the girl's acting. I highly suggest she could secede from acting.

The Meaning of New Media in Communication 1) Thanks to the Babel’s collapse, we use different languages. So people more desired to express and to be heard, as well as cherished the communication abilities. We are stepping into a total strange era, we are confused by many unsolved questions that cannot be answered by the past education and knowledge. We try hard to observe and self-taught, or run faster away from them. No matter facing the questions or hiding by twisting them, we try to find more ways and new mediums to reveal all the confusings and myteries. Luckily we did find some ways to explore ourselves and unknowns in this changeable society. ... As we can see what Wangli’s attempts, from videos, drawings, to new media. He is trying to reach all her potentials. First, his film, XXX is her first film, he accomplished it with 100% sincerity. Wangli took a participate in all progress: script, directing, film-cutting, art and sound, he also did some of the cinema photography, and challenges to perform in English lines. He tries to push himself , to finish something new . This is an experiment to he, but he is willing to learn and he did it for his interest. （Warning：spoiler） At the beginning of XXX, we sense out the depressing atmosphere，an anxious girl smoking cigarette at the roof terrace, a boy walking oddly at night, the girl toss and turn in bed , with sound of ticking, the major characters, emotional tone, herald of whole story’s direction . Like there are tolerances and unusual things under the peace. After her grandfather passes away, we can see, she finally meets the boy, they spend some happy time together, dancing and singing. Until the next blow coming, she loses the relationship, she feels more helpless and lonely. The boy gives her courage to stand at the edge of the terrace, while gives her more courage to live . We see the transformations inside of this girl, her struggling, thinking, depressed ,emotion outburst, and self-compromise. Indeed, she reaches the compromise with herself, believes in elusion and chooses to see more beautiful things in another angle of view.