Correct my story, please
Hi.
I want to tell you a interesting story. When i was little, we wanted to go to the sea. I was very much looking forward to this trip. I really like the sea, i like to dive, to splash.When we arrived there, i went into the water, i realized that i can't swim. I was suprized when i saw people sitting in the water with books or newspaper in their hands. In the water you only sit neatly, because it's a Dead sea.